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[Skears 2 (v0.36)]

Pretty cool

I'd just like to say that even though the game is a little hard on the eyes, it is fun to play... I found myself thinking ugh... not another crap-game... But I couldn't pull myself away until level 16.

All in all, not bad, but you could use some updated actionscript to make it more random, possibly add in a cheap AI. And using a better graphic for the boxes would be nice.
I can help you if you want it, and maybe you don't...
e-mail me if you'd like some help taking this game to the next level.

AcidDimensions responds:

My action script is slowly improving as time goes on.

I don't want to return to this series until I feel I've proven myself with other stuff, but when I do, it will definitely have AI. (only on some levels though)

I'll probably stick with ultra-simple graphics, but I'm sure they could be a bit 'cleaner' and better even with that in mind.

Glad you enjoyed it despite disapproving of the graphics I used.

Stay funky,
Bez

[Evil Wing: Demo]

Nice Intro...

But other than that, this is just a hack. And not a very thorough one at that. Just for the record, how much of the coding is yours?

MetaphorcE responds:

100%
Arse.
See, if you are going to post my review to one of your movies as your review to one of my movies, you should make sure it's appropriate. This doesn't even have an intro. And if was gonna hack someone else's fla why would I choose to hack on which is incomplete? Hell, lets follow your line of thought, I'll just hack into DomoKun Angry Smash Fest and change it to DomoKun Angry Hash Fest by changing some of the objects in the game to marijuana leaves and adding a scene where two of the characters talk about drugs.

Out of interest, one of my other games is a hack - a hack of this. Yep, I basically changed all the graphics to this and called it something different (I abandoned this version and any work I do on the game is done with the other version). But guess what? 100% of the coding is still mine.

So you lose.

[Romancing Eternity]

Cool

Nice. I like the way it's set up, and I loved him kicking the guy down the steps.
Good work.

[Valentine Smoochie]

=]

Wow... I actually laughed.
I just wish there were more

[Pico 1.5 Demo]

ehh-

Not bad, but not great. And isn't Pico Fulp's project?

GROMHELLGROUND responds:

no it isn't

[Joe Ep.2 Streets]

Potential

is nothing unless the flash actually runs properly.
Go back to work on it, because this version sucks. The only way you can advance the speech is through right-clicking... and there is nohing I hate more than that.

[Mech Designer 1]

You only lost points....

Because it's a dress-up doll.
I like the artwork, though.

[Air Hockey]

Not bad

But since when is Airhockey anyone's national pasttime?
You lost points because it's simplistic.. a little too simplistic, plus the computer is a bit tough to beat (but not impossible). Aside from that, my only true beef is that your puck (or stick, or .. ohh who cares) can reach the other side of the board. I know noone who plays quite like that.

All in all. Pretty good.

[Punish Britney]

Cool

Nice stuff, keep going. make more.

[Don't Shoot Marvin]

Good Idea But..

you need to work on the graphical aspects of this. give it another go