TheShrike's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[ANARCHY 2003]

Relax

And stab the scream guy with a rubber duckie

[Shit on the PPG]

Not Bad

But the reason your friends beat it easily is because you(or they) have a slower computer than 90% of newgrounds, there's no other real explanation.

[Alien Hominid]

...

Mad skillz Yo!!

[DFG]

One Thumb Up, One Down

it needs to be a bit more control-responsive, and the airplane sometimes ends up flying sideways, wings ground-to-sky. Also, the black line spitting the bg isn't too attractive.
Maybe you should change it to being a vertically scrolling shooter... like 1942 or Tigershark. You could modify whatever routines you use for altitude to work for that, and it might help with thesideways airplane bug. Also, it's a little too hard to kill the bad guys. You should consider making them a little easier to defeat. And missiles didn't always launch, which didn't help with killing the baddies.

On the other hand, you've put a lot of work into this, and I don't just have critisizms. The settings and controls were well thought out, and it worked, and it was amusing, and while obviously far from complete, it didn't make me feel like I wasted my time. Which is more than most movies I see here end up doing for me.
Keep working on it, it has real promise.

Lozenge responds:

Thanks for the criticisms, I`ll see what I can do about the problems you mentioned asap. I don`t think I`ll change the game format, because I would end up throwing a lot of my work away.

[Anti-Clock Game]

That sucked

That was Clock Crew quality. if you're going to make fun of the clocks, at least try to rise above their skill level.

For future refrence, in the "hit" frame of a button, fill all of the spaces you want to make mouse-reactive.

All in all, not too bad for a freshman attempt.

Burnmage responds:

Yeah, i will fill up my button next time thanks for the tip. Oh and i know that was clock crew quality lol like i say in the comment my graphic sux so...