TheShrike's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Computer Problems 2]

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL ...Not.

And what imaginary plane of existance did this take place in? Backwordsland?

[Old School Mario Remix]

[generic compliment], but...

Your text boxes are shit. You can barely read them. And you might as well have not included buttons for the textboxes, 'cause they were so fucking tiny, as to be nearly impossible to click.

Try and make the text boxes fit the overall feel of the movie, and drop the buttons to procede. Just let the text hang for a second or two, then move on. No one likes clicking-through, especially when it's damn near impossible to see the button you're trying to click.

Otherwise, good job. Not really anything breakthrough, but a good job.

[Days Of Our Lamps]

ELL OH ELL

That was an awesome parody. Kudos!

My only suggestion is a better preloader... the one you have kind of sucks. You could use the NG preloader. Other than that, awesome job.

[Da Mouse]

Best crude humor I've seen this week.

I loved how it did everything I didn't expect it to do. Well, it did do some things I expected. But I still enjoyed being caught off gaurd by what could have easily been a mediocre flash. Good work!

[Schiavo's Secret]

LOL

That was the funniest thing I've seen all day. =D

If you really did do it in one day, you should animate more.

[Grim Reaper Show 5]

Woo-Hoo!

Another reference to the floating Isle of Mandango!

MORE! MORE!

Your work is awesome, and your style is so unique! You rock!

[NGs' Guide to Reviewing!]

Misguided or Common Sense Advice, Nothing New

You did it again, man. =[

Looks like this time you managed to include less misleading info, but the quiz at the end was still ridiculous. And also wrong. #5... I didn't learn jack from this flash.

And ditch the goddamn audio already. 4 Megabytes for this just so I have to mute my computer's speakers when it loads? This file would have been under 200k without that damn song. ZERO FOR AUDIO. Understand? If you're going to BLOAT the filesize with some silly song, you should include a means of muting it >WITHIN THE FLASH<. Heheh... guess what I just did? I just talked about something your flash doesn't have. AND YOU TOLD ME NOT TO!!! OEH NOE!!!

These guides of yours get on my nerves mainly because they all feel half-baked, and don't provide any new info. Or they provide misguided info. Or they blatantly provide only your opinion.

>=[

Potski responds:

Tut Tut Tut. For an experianced NG user that is one bad opinion/review. I cry for you, then start work.